Comments on: Prologue part 3 – Talking to mom and dad http://kirstenwright.wordpress.com/2008/02/01/prologue-part-3/ Writing a romance novel day by day - open for reviews, comments and critiques Wed, 07 May 2008 18:30:46 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 By: Steve http://kirstenwright.wordpress.com/2008/02/01/prologue-part-3/#comment-32 Steve Wed, 05 Mar 2008 04:39:33 +0000 http://kirstenwright.wordpress.com/2008/02/03/prologue-part-3/#comment-32 You need to explain who Stone is. I thought it was a friend not a horse. You need to explain who Stone is. I thought it was a friend not a horse.

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